Sunday, August 4, 2013

Planet X (creative writing)

Planet X

 It's 2413, Future human don't know much about Earth. Earth is just in legends. I haven't seen real Earth until today. We are living in the spaceship called "Planet X" The Earth was invaded by aliens. And we are living in here for about 300 years. Aliens lived in Earth for 5000 years. They look like human being. But they are smarter than human. So maybe Albert Einstein, Leonardo da vinci or many other geniuses are aliens too. They waited and waited to take the Earth.

 To defeat them, we have soldiers. My father used to be a soldier too. and he was one of the greatest soldier in Planet x. Oh, by the way,my name is Paul Parkinson. My father died because of the king alien. So my mo didn't want me to be a soldier, but i had to ignore her to revenge the king of alien. And i become a soldier now. But still my mom told me when i kill them, I'll be same as the alien that kills people.

 Anyway, today, In 3pm at the capital city, aliens appeared. And it'll be my first real war. I'm nervous about this but when i think of my father, I can't hesitate. Soldiers are divided in to three teams: searching team, fighting team, and guarding team. Searching team searches information and tell us. Fighting team which includes me, does most of the fighting. And guarding team protects people especially the president.

 Aliens are coming and i cannot breath. I found the king alien which killed my dad right away.

To choose ending 1, click here.
To choose ending 2, click here.
To choose ending 3, click here.

7 comments:

  1. This is a creative concept for a story. I enjoyed reading it. When you use the pronoun "I" make sure to write it in capitals.

    The links to the endings also work. Keep up the good writing!

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  2. Ju-oh I'm really impressed with this story. You might make film with this story in the future. Have a fantastic camp! See ya soon!!

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    2. Actually you'r father is a Alien,too. King of another kingdom.

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  4. Wow, Ju-oh! I think you are very creative. Your imagination is very good. I love this story. Your blog skin looks pretty cool, and... um... what thing else? I remember there was something to say to you. Ah! I envy you, because you got the 'Best blogger award'. Anyway enjoy your camp at here. Bye~^^

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  5. Ju-oh, I think your story is very interesting. I like ending 2.

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